1st Semester

Hey there, how you doing. Refreshing what i have actually learned this semester, I realize i

still have a long way to go, but i have made tremendous strides so far as a Freshman. I was out

of school for awhile, so learning how to build structure in my sentences and make complete

paragraphs that makes sense took a little while to pick back up on.
Needless to say though, I have transitional a lot of my own style and critique this semester

and plan on maturing my thoughts and my vocabulary as the basis. To clear my speech and

understanding of some of the uses of grammar and the grammatical correctives of some of the

things i used to say and write.

All and all i'm looking forward to next year and am up for the challenge and think i will

deffintly know what to look for this time around. As a college aspect on work sociolaztion and

career path associatixons with people that will follow me through my college career, and am now

working on building up my resume and my professional references.

Eight is enough

hey it's been awhile since i have actually took the secound to think and type to myself, but i guess that is the main reason of why people should have blogs. It is a good way of refreshing your memory and releasing some pent up energy into some interesting word play that helps us define our thoughts. This semesters writing has been pretty easy for the most part, and has taught me a great deal with what is real and what is and has been promoted through t.v and media for years. In relation to paranormal activities, and coastal and sysmic activity that plays a big effect on our earths tides an enertia that balance gravity. In a perfect harmony that we all have derived into, a future of endless possibilities

Really the 7th

So, where was I. (jumps up in down) on mother earths soul, Thats paranormal isn't? I'm writing about life on other planets and I guess mostely on the co existince of planetary life,..In general , Wheel of organisms , biology, pHysics, and oh much more.

I have used more sources then i would like to ever cite on this area of expertiece and pratical knowledge, KIDS , don't be harsh when i say this, But there is no Easter bunny.

www.space.com/scienceastronomy/080916-st-space-life.html

spiff.rit.edu/classes/phys230/lectures/life/life.html

www.spacedaily.com

Blog number 6

I thought i would drop a line so i would be some what ahead of myself for once. I'm waiting for my thesis statement to be accepted as i'm learning more about what exactly the do's and donts are to thesis statement's. I don't think i will have much problem pulling research and getting background information to show my pursuasion.
I have always been average at navigating through web pages or cited material to find what i need via internet such as authors or information that pertains to the subject matter i'm researching. Things I have found useful to most of my research assignments is the play on words through online dictionaries, and libraries to find recited material that could be prudent or importent.

Blog 5 no power

What i have learned about persuasive writing was pretty much what i was already taught from grade school? Persuasive writing is basically the idea and conception of writing about something that you feel strongly about, and picking a declaritive point or position to stand by, and embrace it with a couple facts that support your reasoning and understanding of writing about an article or view point that is controversial or debatable.
All and all don't be overly judgemental or opinionated, state the facts,...and put your own personal believes and personal life experiences , if any, on why you decided on a certain positon

E.G Pro Life, or Pro Choice----abortions?

Blog 4

Well for, # 4 blog, the revising of my latest Essay has come with great strides, for this subject is more confusing then i would like to admit. All in all I've found myself being way to bullheaded just to write some memorized lines from some other media reference. Something about being original
Well yeah, so from there. I have changed just about everything ? Putting more of a substantial emphasis on one pertinent subject. instead of the wide conclusion of Paranormal physic phenomenons, Which is all in all Mainly, Believe on 50 % of what you see and nothing of what you hear. Alongside the new change in subject, reading all of your all's essays last week, with your all's different styles. I have learned a great deal of some things i am going to do as in, sentence structures. Paragraph formula's, and how to site media references correctly. So to everyone good Luck !#(0*&

Number 3

Other then the fact that i think i somehow might of posted my Essay wrong!?! I feel left out, no one has read it yet. Teach I need some Critiquing,..... to see if My essay is going in the right direction are not? Reading other peoples profiles i think that i might of took an other approach at The paranormal understanding of Phenomenons/ and thought s and ideas of psychics. and the fundemental part of all these things, that it has to do with. More along the lines of a more scientific idea and way of thinking? Such as Pseudo Science/ Using a more rational approach to reports and hoaxes of extraterrestrial entities.